Ghalib and luke's What are you doing here?

In my short film film what are you doing here? I have a few strengths and weakness, the strengths that i have are the camera shots for example the close ups that clearly show your facial expressions and how you feel at the time. one of the main strength is the editing and you can clearly show that the scenes cross cut and interchange and got to the other scene. A weakness is that we could of added music to make it more entertain and interesting for the audience and so it can brighten it up a bit more  and another weakness is that we could of added more camera shots for example long shots and medium shots to varies the camera shots and make it more effective and decisive.