Evaluation 8

Firstly for next year i would like to plan our film and in the way we are going to set it up and location first in a lot of detail so that we now what needs to be done from the the start so we have a planned structure and not get to a day before we are supposed to be filming not knowing what needs to be done.

Secondly I would also use a lot more different camera shots types to make it more effective and exciting for the audience and maybe use more equipment to use for different camera shots to make it different and so that it stands out from other films.  I ll  would probably use my own camera instead of the school camera add more quality and sound to the film.

Thirdly i would probably add more sound to our trailer to make it more entertaining for the audience so their are more moments to jump of their seats for them i would do this to create more tension and confusion for the audience to make them think the unexpected.

I would also improve our editing in our film and make it more create and technical to the film to make it sound and look a bit different and unexpected. Another thing i would change is maybe our costumes so it looks like we just came back from a football match and it looks like we dressed up for the match. we could also improve it if the west ham fans had weapons to beat up the mill wall to show more passion from the supporters so it shows they care a lot about their team and that way you could tell that they hate when their team loses.

Evaluation 7

After we finished our preliminary task we made a few changes by first we changed the way we used the 180 degree angle so that we are able to see myself and Luke to make it more effective so that the audience can understand what is going on. So we done this ion the fact that we didn't want to break the rule and so we didn't make the audience confuse in what was going on.

Secondly we added edited our sound so that we put it in on the chasing scene to make that scene upbeat and get the audience of their seats that why the audience feel more involved in the film and they dont knoe what to expect next so we added non- dietetic sound to our film to make it more effective and entertaining for the audience.

We also changed the way we used camera shots in our film we used long shots at the chasing scene at the train station to show what was going on a overview as it was  just after a football match so it was quiet busy i thought that shot showed the tension between the two sets of supporters. We also used close ups between the two west ham fans to show the relationships between each other as they where walking up the train station i thought that was very effective because the audience know they have a close relationship and always got each others back.

Evaluation 6

We used an iPhone 5 to record our phone it has a great quality camera as good as a normal world class camera which we recorded our camera with we had turns on recording the camera for each scene. the iPhone 5 has a great quality camera which is good at various different shots for example close ups and long range.  iPhone 5 packs a 8- megapixel primary camera on the rear and a 1.2 mega pixel front shooter for selfies.






We used a computer to do editing on our film using adobe premier elements 10 effects to make it more attractive and interesting to watch our film we had to change different sizes for our tittles to make it eye catching and used different snapshots, we used a lot of different effects on the computer to make our film. we used a lot of different features to make our film.

Evaluation 5

This is our interview feedback from the class on our film the away diaries where they talk about how we did.

Evaluation 1

We used the way diaries beacuese it sounds like a football hooligian film and it is very attractive and stands out and it is catchy so the audience wont forget the tittle of the film. our film is an action film so it is very effective and it stands out and their is a lot of violence in the film so it goes well with the tittle of the film.

Evaluation 4

The film rating for our film is 15 because there is quiet a lot violence in the film and it is a football hooligan we have two people chasing a west ham fan just because there a rival fan and there is a lot of violence in our film as they beat each other up. we chose a 15 rating because we have aggressive behavior in the film as they are trying to beat him up and there language is quiet bad so that is why we put it as a 15 rating. I also think think if you are under that age you might not understand the film so they might think if you loose a football match that you can go and beat up an opposition football fan which inst acceptable.  The audience will want to watch our film because they will think it is very entertaining and the story line is very understandable to get and it kind of teachers you a lesson in it that violence inst the answer.


Luke i think would shop in designer clothes as he looks hoodies and jeans he will also shop in smart shops because his personality is a mixture of the two i think he will listen to pop music and grime as he looks like a person that will enjoy that as he is into a lot of violence and fighting and he is quiet arrogant in the way he acts throughout the away diaries. The tv programs he would like is deferentially sports channels for example sky sports and other hooligian films like greenstreet and other films linked towards that genre.

Evaluation 2

In  our film we have have Luke as a leading character in our film the away diaries  and he is the one who stands out and is the main character in the film and i would say he has a major comparison with a character called Pete Dunham in the film greenstreet they both football hooligan films and they are both very demanding and have a major authority and they always make the decisions and never want to loose. they both wear casual clothes and look quiet smart they wear hoodies and casual jeans they have very similar personalty to each other and they i think personally they have very similar personalities in the way they act in their films they are both also very passionate football hooligans they love their football teams and cant stand loosing and you can tell that other football fans from other teams will fear them.